Help?

Okay, so I’m sure you might know about the mythology story I’m writing. This is from towards the beginning of the story, but I feel I should reword it. Any suggestions?

 

“Pluto.” A whisper spoke. “Pluto.”
I sat up from my bed. “Who’s there?” I whispered back.
“Come to me, Pluto.”
“Who are you?” I repeated.
“Come and see.”
My feet had found something automatic inside of them, because they began to move without my permission. I tried to stomp my feet, but the only thing I was allowed to do was flail my arms. I was walking towards the forest, where Jupiter had been found dead. I willed my feet to move, but they did not listen. I trampled into the woods, where I had found a lifeless, petrified tree that had been seemingly split apart by lightning. I began to cower, but I forbade myself from doing so because any cowering is a sign of weakness, and that is not the Roman way. I stood up, and said with as strong a voice as I could muster, “What do you want?”

“I only wish but to find an apprentice.” A dark, cloaked figure appeared. “If you agree, I will spare your life.”
“Who are you?” I repeated once more.
“Oh, right. You’re scared. Be not frightened, it is but Hades.” He laughed a rather dauntingly, and pulled the hood away from his face. He had my features, from what I could see. He had short brown hair, brown eyes, the same toned skin. It was almost like he was family. But it couldn’t have been.
“Hades,” I repeated, “I have not heard the name.”
“That is because you are not Greek. I am Hades, god of the Underworld.”
“God of the Underworld.” I muttered. “What do you want with me?”

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The Poet

I DO NOT OWN THESE WORDS, BUT THEY ARE INSPIRING AND I LOVE SAYWECANFLY.  (random song suggestion :p hope you like it)

 

Lyrics:

Somewhere deep down in my heart,
there’s a poet, and a liar.
They are juxtaposed more than the sun and the moon,
yet they find a way to work together.
And with every word that I say, they are writing and conspiring.
How the hell can we just make it worse?
Kiss the girl that you love, then you hurt her…
For some reason I can’t seem to shake
oh, this feeling I get that I’m drifting away from true love..

Oh, if I could rip my heart in two,
then I’d give you the half you deserve.
And just always remember I honestly would die for you.
’cause I couldn’t live without you.

And I tried so hard not to be what I saw growing up,
but that only made me into a rabid dog, baring its teeth.
Not the man I hoped I’d grow to be.
two steps closer, I’m six steps back,
and I bring you down with me…
Oh, it tears me apart, yeah, it honestly does,
just to know that I made it all worse.
For some reason I can’t seem to shake
oh, this feeling I get that I’m drifting away from true love..

Oh, if I could rip my heart in two,
then I’d give you the half you deserve.
And just always remember I honestly would die for you.
’cause I couldn’t live without you.

Got a Song Addiction?

HAVE I GOT THE  SOLUTION FOR YOU!

WHEN YOU’RE LISTENING TO THE SONG ON YOUTUBE, REPLACE “YOUTUBE” IN THE URL WITH “LISTENONREPEAT”

TRY IT, IT WORKS!

My recent song addiction is “Famous Last Words” from My Chemical Romance, and when I went to listenonrepeat, I realized just how many people need to know of the glory of it.

listenonrepeat.com is basically a youtube video loop, whatever video you use it repeats until you stop it. It works just like youtube with a broken replay button.

I HOPE THIS HELPS!

Follow/ Lead

Some choose to follow

Others lead

Some choose to take initiative

And yet others choose to disagree

 

Nothing is done as they have been said

Nor chosen with hindsight

There are things in this world though,

That just happen to shine bright

 

The things we choose to do,

Or things we stand behind

Can bring out the best in us

Or make us wish to turn back time

 

Whichever is chosen

Do so with pride

Do not hide in regret

Follow what’s inside

 

In your chest, there’s a place

Where your greatest desires go

Do your best to make a choice

Never choose others over your soul

 

Do you chose to lead?

Or do you choose to follow?

Be careful in your choice

And don’t you find that tomorrow

You have chosen wrong

And you have to live in sorrow

For you have followed.

Maybe Mythology?

I’ve started to write a short story.

One for the short story workshop in my creative writing club.

I had a strange idea that might just work

It’s combining Greek and Roman mythology.

What if Pluto was Hades’ apprentice?

In this case, both Pluto and Hades would have to look similar, and it would take many years for Pluto to learn the ways of the Underworld.

This way, more people in Rome would recognize him as Pluto, while people in Greece would still consider him to be Hades.

If you’d like to know more about the story, just tell me and I might just post an excerpt.

If you’re writing a short story, I would love to hear all about it!

Hamilton

“Just stay alive, that would be enough.”

I HAVE BEEN LISTENING TO THE MUSIC FOR THIS BROADWAY MUSICAL ALL DAY!

It’s amazing music, especially “Satisfied”, “My Shot”, “You’ll Be Back”, and “That Would Be Enough”. I love the history in the musical, and the musical twist they took on it. Usually, I don’t listen to rap music whatsoever (rap lovers don’t hate me), but this music has proven to be really good!

The musical is about Alexander Hamilton, the man on the 10 dollar bill, and the life he led. I can say that I have learned a lot about Hamilton through this musical. It teaches pretty much everything on him, in a crazy fun and addicting way!

But I have to thank the person who showed me this brilliant musical, Mrs. Emery. She is the Creative Writing Club sponsor and English(I’m pretty sure) teacher at FLVS, and an amazing person, if I do say so myself.

So tips to the person looking for a weird history lesson, listen to the music of Hamilton, or even better, watch the musical. I know I will!

Blogger Recognition Award

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I’ve been nominated for the Blogger Recognition Award! The rules of this award are simple:

1.Thank whoever nominated you and provide a link to their blog. 

Thank you, musingpenfeme for nominating me!

2. Write a post to show your award. Attach the photo to the post. 

Well, doing so!

3. Give a brief story on how your blog started.

Well, um, it’s rather boring but here goes: It was shortly after I received my laptop, on my birthday. I had found this website through the CWC website for FLVS, and decided to make one. So, my journey embarked. I started posting, and found people actually liked it. So I kept doing it. Pretty boring story, but mine nonetheless.

4.Give a piece of advice to new bloggers.

I’m going to tell any new bloggers that it’s okay to be afraid. I was at first too. I thought no one was going to read my post, let alone like them. How can people read your amazing work if you don’t post it?

5. Select 10 other blogs to give the award to.

(I’ll do as many as I can, but I only have 10 followers)

Sourav Adhikari

Dziey

Grace

xfairypix

Meganqm1

DRAG ME DOWN

Blue

aVeryAwkwardBlog

Starrlet

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